early models |
improved sectional models |
The critics at the mid review provided some very helpful criticism. I think the overall theme was that I really need to step back and clarify what I want the building to do. If I say that the building is supposed to be like the gates and the fence- permeable but defining space- then I have to create that. I can't just lift the building up. I knew that the space under the building couldn't be empty, but that's something that has to be developed from the beginning-otherwise it becomes just an elevated building. Also, the sectional changes can't be disconnected from the site. Where there are sectional voids become the "gates" and the masses have to reach down to become the "fence". Another thing to keep in mind is that I've argued that you can see through the fence, so I have to consider how much you can see through the building. Perhaps there needs to be a module where the building is more transparent- the iron parts of the fence- and then more solid- like the brick pieces that also keep the fence standing. Every decision should be based around the same idea. Another statement that I thought was interesting from the review was about how the building relates to the Carpenter Center. I know that this is part of the project statement, but I seem to have been disregarding it, something I shouldn't be doing.